Love at First Sight? You tell me.

Each month the writers at LadyScribes introduce a topic for critique. This week we are asking for scenes where the Hero and Heroine first "see" each other. Not meet, but "see" or "notice" the other. It can be from either the Hero's POV or the Heroine's. With a 500 word limit it can only be one of them. If you have a scene you want critiqued, head on over to ladyscribes and post it. The rules are in today's blog. It is not a contest, just a way to get some honest and friendly feedback on your writing. The critiques will be posted next week and each entry is anonymous. Hope to see you at http://ladyscribes.blogspot.com/